Jacob Inman

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2nd draft

My story

            One day I was at my house playing games and my parents were at dinner and I was alone………or so I thought. It was about eight thirty and I heard a knock on the door. I assumed it was my parents so I went to go see and it was my friend. Surprised I said “What are you doing here?” He told me that I invited him over the day before.  I didn’t believe him because I didn’t have my phone that day. So I asked him when did I invite you, He said that he called right after school but I didn’t have my phone I had lost it.

            The next day I went up to him and asked to see his phone so I could check the recent calls it said I had called him but I didn’t have my phone. So I went home to try and find my phone but I couldn’t find it I look and look and look even more, but I still never found it. So I asked him for his phone again and I called my phone someone one picked it up. I told them that they have my phone and he said he knows. It was my other friend he had taken my phone and used it. So I went after school to get it and he said that he had found my phone in the locker room and he took it so he could give it back to me. I thanked him and took it back.

              So the next day all I could think about was how I managed to lose my phone.  Was it the shorts I had been wearing that day?   Did they have a hole in them and it got big enough for the phone to fall out? I went to my closet to get those shorts, I found them under a large pile of clothes and sure enough the hole was huge I could put my whole hand through it.  I had to go fix it, I asked my mom but she said she was busy and couldn’t do it today. The problem was they were my favorite shorts so I needed them fixed. I headed to my grandma’s house and she said she could get that fixed nice and quick and she did and I thanked her.

            As I was one my way home the worst thing happened I got the shorts caught in the door of the car and when I didn’t know they were stuck I started to walk to the door, Rrrrrrrrrip I looked and the shorts looked like pants I sat there for a moment and I thought to myself What the heck just happened?  I was so angry I just got them fixed and now they were completely ruined so I said screw it and I threw them away.

              As I walked inside I told my parents that I was home and nobody answered so I went around looking and found nothing. So I called my mom and asked where she was and she said “You know we are out at dinner” I thought to myself what the heck just happened. Then the  weirdest thing happened I heard a knock on the door and I opened it and saw my friend, The same one who had came over last week or so I thought it was last week. I thought to myself major déjà vu. So I let him in and asked when did I invite you he said the day before and I said that’s what you said last time. He looked at me puzzled and said “Last Time?” I told him the whole story and he said that I was in the hospital.

           The next day I was thinking to myself so I had a dream of something that didn’t even happen yet I had the whole dream while in the hospital. So I asked him why I was in the hospital and he told me that I was on a ATV and I had lost control and hit a tree. I said  yea I remember hitting the tree, but after that I was out of it. He told me that I was in a mini coma for like a week and missed all those days of school and I said so that’s why I had so much homework and class work to do when I got back. So those were some crazy two weeks for me.

                                                     THE END

(By the way This a fake story)